Friday, November 26, 2010

I am watching her :P

Hello guys! sharing with you my first attempt at 55 fiction . For those who are not familiar with 55 fiction .ok!

55 Fiction :-55 fiction" is the art of writing a short story in 55 words or less. At first glance, it sounds ridiculous but if you read a few you may be suprised just how much you can say in such a short space.
  
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I'm watching her.She's  beautiful in her blue saree. .From the past 30 minutes her mesmerizing voice drove me crazy. I don't know how i'm going to tell her about my.........

"Pay attention"  She shouted!

My chin slipped off from my hand ,awakened guiltily with abashment ."huh! it's time to concentrate on my lesson again" I thought

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4 nice people who replied back:

Writer said...

Since this was your first attempt , its a good try ! I still feel you could work on this more and make it more interesting , and well I will soon try it out to ! Sounds challenging and tempting :P:)

Anuroop reddy said...

writer

Thanks for dropping by :), will try to impress you next time :)

yeah! ,try it.mind you it's not easy

Good luck :)

sankee said...

brief n straight 2 d point portrait of d general situation of dreamers of our kind

Anuroop reddy said...

sankee--> yup! seconded and thanks for the comment :)

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