Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Left Alone


I sat next to Kriti’s bed.She started to wake up.I tried to call the doctor, but she told me not to.
“you were awake” I yelled crying

“Yeah I guess”she finally said

“I wish I could trade places with you.Do you know how much it hurt’s me,to see you like this” 

“Karthik?”

“Hmm! “  Her voice bothered me.I took a deep breath

“I love you” She whispered

“I love you too”

“Tell my parents that I love them and promise you’ll never forget me .Promise me” She started crying.

“What! Stop you can’t leave me”

“I love you Karthik” she cried as she closed her eyes

“No! don’t leave me!” I panicked and yelled louder

Her dad ran in to the room, when he heard the moniter went flat.I ran out of the way as doctors and nurses rushed to Kriti’s side.

My love of life has left me all alone in this world.

39 nice people who replied back:

Lehari. said...

Is this real ?

... Madhumathi ... said...

touCHING!!!!!!

BlueRoses said...

I really hope this is pure fiction.

If it isn't, thenI'm really sorry... :(

Anuroop reddy said...

Lehari

It isn't real, it's fiction

thanks for the read :)

Anuroop reddy said...

Madhumathi thank you :)

Anuroop reddy said...

meghana yeah it's pure fiction , Thanks for the read..keep visiting :)

Amar said...

Spellbound by simple yet bigger impact of your post! Great work!

maniac.hunter said...

nice story :)

Priyanka Kamath said...

That is a nice read:)

'“I love you Karthik” she cried as she closed her eyes'
These lines gave me shivers.

Even though I haven't experienced something like this ever, I could still feel it.

I think that's one excellent post:)

Anuroop reddy said...

@Amar Thanks bro.., Welcome to my blog :)

Keep visiting

Gowthami said...

painful yet perfect..!

Anuroop reddy said...

Gowthami thank you a million :D

deadman said...

Very touching, very moving. Bravo!!

Anuroop reddy said...

Amar--> Thanks bro :) welcome to my blog

Anuroop reddy said...

Maniac-->Thank you :) Keep Visiting :)

Anuroop reddy said...

Priyanka--> thank you.. u made my day :)

Anuroop reddy said...

deadman--> thanks bro Keep Visiting :)

Gowthami said...

Hi Anuroop...

You have some work to do..
visit ma blog here
http://myblogmyviews-gowthami.blogspot.com/2011/05/first.html

Smile,
Gowthami

Nidhi said...

I actually thought it was real. You scared me.

I love the way your write!

Anuroop reddy said...

Nidhi

Thank you :)

Anuroop reddy said...

Gowthami

Hey! that was really so sweet of you.., thanks a lot for the award :)

Aishwarya Nagula said...

This is short but CRAAZZILLYY beautiful. :)

Anuroop reddy said...

Thank you aishwarya :)

Rachit said...

so real yet it can't be.. purely true :) Thanks for following News not making news.

rachitlifestyle.blogspot.com

ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/Ashwini said...

Nice one! I liked those well penned lines .Very touching..First time here and thoroughly enjoyed my coming.

pavan said...

dude ... u r slowly turnin out to becum a perfect scene writer ... !!! try writin a play... i shall make that as a short movie :) :) :)
grt work ..goosebumps !!

sankee said...

truly touchin mama...description z too gud, more on feel than on mattr...brainy stuff...lykd it a zillion :):):)

J said...

Truly Touching.
Love the blog.
:)

Anuroop reddy said...

Rachit

thanks bro!

Ashwini

Thanks for dropping by.

Anuroop reddy said...

pavan

he he! sure mama. I was planning too. Let's make one short movie.

Sankeerth

Thanks mama.Glad you liked it.

Anuroop reddy said...

J

thanks for stopping by. Welcome to my blog. :)

Drrama Queen said...

Hey,my first time on ur blog :D
I was just going to say sorry but then I read it's fiction ..Could've fooled me! Loved the post!!

The Blue Periwinkle said...

Super awesome...
Loved it.

indira said...

felt sad for the tragic end.if it is fiction thoughts could be expressed more efficiently

Sneha Sunny said...

it's very touchy...brought tears in my eyes.... It's good that it's a work of fiction.... Nice post!!!

Rajendra Raikwar said...

Nice post....

Anuroop reddy said...

Drama queen --> I abandoned my blog long back, so couldn't reply soon

Glad you liked it.
Keep coming back

Indira >> Hi, Thanks for the comment.yes! I second that, i should have written more elaborately.will try to impress you next time

Keep coming back.

Sneha -> hey you made my day. glad you liked it

Rajendra --> thanks mate.. Keep coming back

Sri Valli said...

Beautifully narrated! :)

Indrani said...

At least she could say a proper good bye!
Good one.

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